9 marks · about 9 minutes
To what extent does tourism bring more benefits than problems to a glaciated upland area?
To what extent means: Weigh up how far something is true, with evidence on both sides, then give a clear judgement.
Level 1 (Basic)· 3/9 marks (band 1–3)
Tourism brings money to the Lake District but also traffic and erosion. I think it brings more benefits.
Why this level: Simple points on both sides, with no detail, and an unsupported judgement. To reach Level 2: use facts to explain the benefits and problems.
Level 2 (Clear)· 5/9 marks (band 4–6)
About 18 million visitors come to the Lake District each year, and the national park accounts for over half of Cumbria's tourism spending and jobs. However, most visitors arrive by car, so honeypot sites such as Windermere and Keswick get congested. Paths are eroded by walkers, and about half of Keswick's homes are second homes or holiday lets.
Why this level: Clear, accurate benefits and problems. But it doesn't weigh them or consider management, and there's no judgement. To reach Level 3: evaluate how serious the problems are, how management helps, and conclude.
Level 3 (Detailed)· 8/9 marks (band 7–9)
Tourism brings the Lake District great benefits. About 18 million visitors come each year, for the mountains, lakes, walking and water sports, and the national park accounts for over half of Cumbria's tourism spending and tourism jobs, supporting hotels, shops and outdoor centres. However, the problems are serious. Most visitors arrive by car, so honeypot sites such as Windermere, Keswick and Grasmere suffer congestion. Popular paths are eroded by millions of feet. Second homes push up house prices: at the 2011 Census, 24% of the national park's homes had no permanent resident, and about half of Keswick's homes are second homes or holiday lets, so local people struggle to afford homes. Management reduces some of these problems: Fix the Fells repairs paths by stone pitching, and a 10 mph speed limit for powered boats on Windermere reduces noise and danger. Overall, tourism brings more benefits than problems, but only because careful management limits the damage; the housing problem remains hard to solve.
Why this level: Detailed, accurate evidence on benefits, problems and management, weighed to give a balanced, supported judgement. This is Level 3.