9 marks · about 9 minutes
To what extent do the economic advantages of extracting a fossil fuel outweigh the environmental costs?
To what extent means: Weigh up how far something is true, with evidence on both sides, then give a clear judgement.
Level 1 (Basic)· 3/9 marks (band 1–3)
The oil sands in Canada make money and jobs, but they pollute. I think the costs are bigger.
Why this level: Simple points with no detail and an unsupported judgement. To reach Level 2: use facts to explain the economic advantages and the environmental costs.
Level 2 (Clear)· 5/9 marks (band 4–6)
Alberta's oil sands produced just under 3.5 million barrels a day in 2024. They bring jobs, taxes and royalties, and secure energy for Canada, with exports mainly to the USA. However, extraction uses lots of energy and water, so it releases more greenhouse gas per barrel than most oil, and toxic waste water is stored in tailings ponds.
Why this level: Clear, accurate advantages and costs. But they aren't weighed, and there's no judgement. To reach Level 3: compare short-term and long-term effects, and who is affected, then conclude.
Level 3 (Detailed)· 8/9 marks (band 7–9)
Alberta's oil sands bring large economic advantages. They hold about 167 billion barrels of proven reserves and produced just under 3.5 million barrels a day in 2024. This creates jobs, and taxes and royalties help fund public services, while giving Canada secure energy and exports, mainly to the USA. However, the environmental costs are serious. Shallow bitumen is surface-mined after forest is cleared, destroying habitats, and deeper bitumen is heated with steam, so extraction uses huge amounts of energy and water. As a result, it releases more greenhouse gas per barrel than most oil, adding to climate change. Toxic waste water is stored in tailings ponds, and First Nations communities downstream worry about river pollution. Overall, the economic advantages are large, but they are mostly short-term and depend on oil prices, while the environmental costs are long-lasting and global, so they don't clearly outweigh them.
Why this level: Detailed, accurate evidence on both sides, weighed by timescale and who is affected, with a justified judgement. This is Level 3.