4 marks · about 4 minutes
Using an example, explain how modern industrial development can be more environmentally sustainable.
Explain means: Give the reasons why something happens, developing each point with "because" or "so".
Level 1 (Basic)· 2/4 marks (band 1–2)
Torr Quarry uses trains to move its stone. It has planted trees.
Why this level: Two relevant points, but not explained. To reach Level 2: explain how each makes the quarry more environmentally sustainable.
Level 2 (Clear)· 4/4 marks (band 3–4)
Torr Quarry, in Somerset's Mendip Hills, sends much of its stone by train on its own rail link, which cuts lorry traffic, noise and emissions. About 60 of its 205 hectares have been landscaped with earth banks and trees to screen the workings, and when quarrying ends, plans are for it to flood, making a lake for wildlife and recreation.
Why this level: Clear, developed explanation with a named example and facts. Full marks.