9 marks · about 12 minutes · +3 SPaG
To what extent do the effects of earthquakes depend on a country's wealth? Use examples.
To what extent means: Weigh up how far something is true, with evidence on both sides, then give a clear judgement.
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Use the facts from:
- Chile 2010 and Nepal 2015 earthquakes (Maule, Chile, and Gorkha, Nepal, 27 February 2010 and 25 April 2015)
Level 1 (Basic)· 3/9 marks (band 1–3)
Rich countries can afford better buildings so fewer people die. In poor countries more people die. Nepal had a big earthquake and lots of people died.
Why this level: A simple point about wealth with a vague example and no figures. There is no judgement, and other factors aren't considered. To reach Level 2: compare two named earthquakes with facts, and explain how wealth made the difference.
Level 2 (Clear)· 5/9 marks (band 4–6)
Wealth matters a lot. Chile is richer than Nepal and has strict building codes, so its magnitude 8.8 earthquake in 2010 killed about 520 people. Nepal's 2015 earthquake was smaller, magnitude 7.8, but killed over 8,790 people, because many homes were not built to resist earthquakes. Chile also sent 14,000 troops within days. So the effects of earthquakes depend on wealth.
Why this level: Clear, accurate use of both case studies to explain how wealth shaped the effects. But it only argues one side, so the judgement isn't weighed. To reach Level 3: consider other factors, such as landscape and timing, then judge how far wealth matters.
Level 3 (Detailed)· 8/9 marks (band 7–9)
Wealth matters a great deal. Chile could afford strict building codes, so its magnitude 8.8 earthquake in 2010 killed about 520 people, while Nepal's smaller magnitude 7.8 earthquake in 2015 killed over 8,790, many in rural homes that weren't built to resist earthquakes. Wealth also shapes responses: Chile sent 14,000 troops within days and announced a US$2.5 billion housing plan, while Nepal relied on 134 rescue teams from 34 countries. However, wealth isn't the only factor. Nepal's mountains caused landslides that buried villages in the Langtang valley and made remote areas hard to reach. Timing mattered too: Nepal's earthquake struck on a Saturday, when schools were closed, which probably saved many children. Wealth can even raise some effects: Chile's damage cost about US$30 billion, far more than Nepal's, because its buildings were worth more. Overall, wealth is the most important factor in how many people die, because it decides how well buildings are built and how fast help arrives, but landscape and timing change the effects too.
Why this level: Detailed, accurate evidence from both earthquakes; other factors are weighed against wealth, and the conclusion explains how far wealth matters. A small extra point, such as the strength of the tsunami in Chile, could secure 9.